| LETTER 1 |
Comments
- Get organised!
- You're going to be writing at least 3 letters and maybe a lot more so get a new file that you can place all documentation in
- Good paperwork is important because if you have to take matters beyond the bank to a higher authority you may need to pass your case file on to them
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Mr One's Address
23 High Street
London
ABC1 8YZ
The ABC Bank
1 Bank Square
Bank Town
BK1 7TD
Date: xxxxx
Dear Sir or Madam
Account number - xxxxxxxxxx
Sort Code - xxxxxx
After recently obtaining a copy of my credit file from Experian I was concerned to note that your company has placed a "Default" notice against a joint account in my and my wife's name.
Further to this neither I nor my wife have a recollection of ever receiving such a notice, and I therefore require you to substantiate this data at your earliest convenience.
1. You must supply me with a true copy of the alleged agreement you refer to. This is my right under your obligation to supply a copy of the agreement under the legislation contained within s.78 (1) Consumer Credit Act 1974 (s.77 (1) for fixed sum credit). Your obligation also extends to providing a statement of account. I enclose a £1 postal order in payment of the statutory fee, PO Serial Number 1587 716732.
2. You must supply me with a signed true and certified copy of the original default notice
3. Any deed of assignment if the debt was sold on
I would request that this data is provided to myself within the next 28 days, if you are unable to provide this data then I must insist that it is removed from my files as unsubstantiated.
Yours faithfully
Mr & Mrs One
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Comments
- It is important that this letter is sent recorded delivery
- Also note that £1 was sent in the form of a Postal Order (a photocopy of this postal order should be attached to a copy of your original letter and placed in your file)
- Note, that all letters are written by Mr & Mrs One because the account was in their dual names. This also meant that a default notice was placed against both their credit files
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| The ABC Bank's reply to Letter 1 |
Dear Mr One
We write with reference to your letter dated xxxxx.
We write to confirm that after checking with Experian it shows that when the account was satisfied via a full and final payment the default notice was also marked as satisfied with Experian.
If you have any queries, please do not hesitate to contact us on the number above.
Please find enclosed your postal order for £1.
Yours sincerely
Customer Services Manager
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Comments
- A classic fob-off letter telling Mr One nothing, apart from what he already knew
- Interesting to note that they try to get Mr One to call them if he needs anymore help
- NEVER speak to anyone on the telephone even if they call you
- Politely say that you want ALL correspondence in writing
- OK, it's time to hit them with letter 2 (you can wait a week if you want but why not write back the same day)
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| LETTER 2 |
Dear Sir or Madam
Your Ref : On the last letter from ABC bank there will be a reference number, place it in here
Account number - xxxxxxxx
Sort Code - xxxxxx
Thank you very much for your letter dated xxxxxx.
You however tell both my wife and I information that we already know. We have both seen our Credit References and the notice of 'Default' and then 'Satisfied' next to the item relating to the ABC bank.
It is the 'Default' notice that we are very concerned about because neither I nor my wife have any recollection of ever receiving such a notice.
The three questions in the original letter dated xxxxx (letter 1) specifically relate to this point and request you to substantiate this information. Could you therefore answer in full the questions contained in the xxxxxx (letter 1 date) letter of which we enclose a copy, we also enclose a £1 postal order.
It is your duty to comply with my requests under the law.
Yours faithfully
Mr & Mrs One
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Comments
- As we mentioned above Mr One's default has been 'satisfied' but this does not matter for this strategy
- Even if the default had not been marked 'satisfied' the letters written would have been the same
- Make sure you send this letter recorded delivery as well
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| The ABC Bank's reply to Letter 2 |
Dear Mr & Mrs One
We write with reference to your letter dated xxxxx (letter 2).
We can confirm that we have requested a copy of the Default Notice and also the account opening form and once this is received we will send these along with statements as requested.
Yours sincerely
Customer Service Manager
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Comments
- OK, now they understand that Mr One cannot be fobbed off and perhaps knows what he's doing so they might be forced to do some work
- But will they do anything or continue to brush the matter under the carpet hoping that Mr One forgets, or is disorganised?
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| LETTER 3 |
Comments
- Nothing was heard back from the bank for over 28 days which is the normal time limit for this kind of correspondence
- Mr One therefore puts in a threat in his next letter, in a professional manner of course
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Dear Sir or Madam
Your Ref : xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Account number - xxxxxxxx
Sort Code - xxxxxx
I wrote to you on the xxxxx (letter 1) and the xxxxx (letter 2) asking for some relevant information. I enclose copies of the two letters which were both sent via recorded delivery.
You wrote back to me on the xxxxxxxx without answering any of the questions put to you in the original letter.
As 28 days has now passed from the date of the 2nd letter you are now in breach of your duties under Section 78 of the Consumer Credit Act. If you do not answer my original questions and reply within 7 days I will have no choice but to escalate the matter to the relevant authorities including the Banking Ombudsman, Office of Fair Trading and the Information Commissioner's Office.
Yours faithfully
Mr & Mrs One
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Comments
- Note the 2nd sentence in the first paragraph 'which were both sent by recorded delivery'
- Let the bank know that they can't get out of this easily, Mr One is right on their case
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| The ABC Bank's reply to Letter 3 |
Dear Mr One
Thank you for taking the time to write to us about your concerns. All concerns are important to us and we welcome the opportunity to address the issues raised.
We are not yet able to answer your concerns fully, as we need to look into matters further. We will contact you again in 10 working days either with a full response or to update you on the progress we have made. However, if you wish to discuss matters, please contact us on telephone xxxx xxxxxx.
Yours sincerely
Mr A Realname
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Comments
- Now Mr One is getting somewhere especially as this letter is signed by a real person and not a 'customer service representative'
- The bank are now are under no illusion who they're dealing with, ie somebody who knows the right threats to use, in this case a 'breach of your duties under Section 78 of the Consumer Credit Act'
- Note again that they're trying to get Mr One to telephone rather than put things in writing
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| Further reply to Letter 3 from the ABC Bank |
Dear Mr One
Thank you for your patience whilst we have been addressing your concerns. Whilst we had hoped to be in a position to resolve matters by now, unfortunately, this has not yet been possible due to delays in obtaining the information that we require to complete our review.
Please accept our sincere apologies for the delay. We will contact you again within the next 10 working days with an update or a full response.
Meanwhile, please feel free to contact this office, if you wish to discuss this further on telephone xxxx xxxxxx.
Yours sincerely
Mr A Realname
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Comments
- It's obvious now that Mr One's letters are in the system and logged because they replied within 10 days of their previous letter
- Again, they subtly try to get Mr One to call with his concerns - fat chance
- However, after hearing nothing back from them for a week it's time for Mr One to suggest that because they cannot provide the paperwork asked for in letter 1 they should remove the 'default' notice all together
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| LETTER 4 |
Dear Mr Realname
Your Ref : xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
Account number - xxxxxxxx
Sort Code - xxxxxx
Thank you very much for your letter dated xxxxxxx (the one above). However, as you have now exceeded the statutory time for the data provision requested could you please consider removing the data in its entirety as unsubstantiated.
If you do not feel that you are in a position to do this we will have no further option but to refer this case to the Information Commissioner Office, Banking Ombudsman and Trading Standards as appropriate.
Yours sincerely
Mr & Mrs One
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Comments
- No comments apart from there being 3 real threats contained in the last paragraph
- All of those organisations mentioned will likely take Mr One's side if this matter intensifies further, and the ABC bank knows this
- As we mentioned earlier on it's all about the correct paperwork and procedure which has to be followed
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| Reply to letter 4 from ABC Bank |
Dear Mr One
Thank you for your patience whilst we have been addressing your concerns. Whilst we had hoped to be in a position to resolve matters by now, unfortunately, this has not yet been possible due to delays in obtaining the information that we require to complete our review.
Please accept our sincere apologies for the delay. We will contact you again within the next 10 working days with an update or a full response.
Meanwhile, please feel free to contact this office, if you wish to discuss this further on telephone xxxx xxxxxx.
Yours sincerely
Mr A Realname
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Comments
- This is just not on, the letter is exactly the same as one received less than 30 days ago!
- Mr One therefore immediately fires off a response trying to bring the matter to an end
- He feels that as the paperwork is not forthcoming the odds-on getting the default removed are moving into his favour
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| LETTER 5 |
Dear Mr Realname
Your reference xxxxxxxxxxxxx
Thank you letter dated xxxxx which I note it is an exact replica of your letter dated xxxxx. In your most recent letter you have not give me an update or a full response as you stated that you would in your previous letter.
I refer you to the last paragraph of my letter dated xxxxx (letter x) stating that I must refer this case to the information Commissioners office, the Banking Ombudsman and the trading Standards.
Would you please reply to this letter within 10 days giving the details of the data provision previously requested.
Yours sincerely
Mr & Mrs One
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| Reply to letter 4 from ABC Bank (this came within 3 days of the Letter 5 being sent) |
Dear Mr & Mrs One
Ref xxxxxxxxxxxxx
I write regarding the above detailed account and in response to your letters dated xxxxx and xxxxxx. Thank you for your patience while we have been investigating the matters.
Unfortunately, it appears that you did not receive the letter forwarded to you on xxxxx (a copy of which has been enclosed for ease of reference).
I regret to advise you that I have been unable to obtain copies of the original account documentation of the default notice. Consequently, as it appears that the requested documentation has been lost, copies could not be provided within 28 days of your request. Please accept my apologies for any inconvenience this may have caused you.
Since we have been unable to locate a copy of the default notice issued, as an exceptional matter, the necessary action has been taken to delete the adverse data recorded with the credit reference agencies.
Thank you for taking the time and trouble to bring this to the bank's attention.
Yours sincerely
Mr Another Realname
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Comments
- Bingo! Mr One has won the battle and forced the bank to remove the default notice from his credit file
- About a month later Mr One then requested a new copy of his credit file from Experian to check the default had been removed, it had
- However, if it had not then the process was likely still in the 'system' and another polite letter to the bank reminding them would be in order
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